I love this narrator – s/he is sad & hopeful at the same time.

So funny to me when I accidentally leave a character’s gender ambiguous. Of course, I’m picturing it a certain way, so it’s obvious to me and winds up going unsaid. I say let the narrator be whichever gender you like.

You were in the “zone” on this one. As another ficleteer & I recently noted, you’ve really “raised your game” my friend. The force is strong in this one….