The only bad stuff I could find was a mixup between telepathy and telekinesis, and a lack of a superpowered catfight. Otherwise it was excellent. Keep up the good work!

Thanks Pockets! You are correct about that mixup. Duh on my part!

Nah, there is no mix-up. According to the dictionary, telekinesis IS “the power to move something by thinking about it without the application of physical force.” Entertaining one, StrugglingWriter, but you can do better.