i like this…its very short and sweet….like a little glimpse into these characters lives

it flows weirdly in the first paragraph though, there is no definitive pause in the sentence…i think it would flow better if you changed looking to looked in the second line

just a tip :)

I had the sudden urge to sing

“First I take they order like da coffeshop
Then I steam and cook it up like da coffeeshop
Then I serve it out the window like a coffeeshop”

(Coffeeshop, look it up!)

thanks artistsrunwild, reading the opening you’re right. Wonder if I can change this.

Don’t think I’ve heard that song, Moon. Worth checking out?