Hmm, disorienting, as all in this series are. Not sure where to go from here, so I’ll take my time on a sequel, unless someone else wants to jump in with something. (please do!)

really good sequel

i just realised the tense at the very end was wrong and should be in present….and i want him to be coming to visit her in the present

so it had to be in present tense

and THX hurry up and do the sequel!!

Okay, okay, I finally did a sequel. I’m not sure about it, but heck, I haven’t been sure of any of my contributions to this series.

You and THX are a good tag team ficleteers.