Good Job!

Thank you so much!

It’s a nice description of a moment in time, making it easy to feel the singer’s wonder and appreciation for the moment.

To be nit-picky, I’d find an alternate word for ‘looked’ at the end of the first paragraph, just to avoid repeating it in the same sentence. Just a thought.

You make me smile. :] I agree with THX , except for I have no attention span at the moment and can’t concentrate long enough to type an actual review. Which is why I love this website. :D

.. Oh & you spelt “excitement” wrong in the first paragraph. :p MINUETS .

Thanks THX . Since nobody has done a ficlet on that picture I figured I’d do one, plus I love death cab for cutie. And thank you for the suggestion, i was scramble to finish it so I will def. change it. =D

Chris makes you smile? Really? Are you sober? And I’m not surprised you can’t concentrate. =/