An excellent description of the picture.

Wow, it is such a great description of the picture. The two fit together perfectly!

My favorite line is the first one—“The moon rose orange in the smoky night and hung forlornly in the sky above the blackened remains of the forest.” I love that!

thanks! Even though its a picture of a soybean field……I first glanced at it and thought…burnt forest! The small thumbnails on the inspiration page don’t provide a lot of details. LOL I decided not to change my story to a soybean field, but keep my original idea.

Yeah, just go with the story as it is. A soybean field doesn’t have quite the same effect…”and hung forlornly over the soybean field”…yeah. Burnt forest is much better.

The imagery was amazing, love that it was written in present tense, the here and now, rather than past tense.That you used s’s at the end of words rather than -ed, gave the feel of its being current happening now, not in the past.

I write it like I see it!;)

Nice word picture.
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_ I decided not to change my story to a soybean field_
I don’t think the picture has to exactly match anyway.