Hope you don’t mind that I wrote a sequel to your contest entry. Don’t know why—just did.

this is great…the end is creepy…but just to be picky can you please change comming to coming

im thingo about spelling lol….trust me..it will give you two extra characters!

ya i knew something was wrong with that. i’m a bad speller. :) oh well, lol. i fixed it.

scary and suprising…good ficlet