You misspelled “Winnie” in the third to last line, but other then that this is great!
Oh my, that was abrupt. I liked the little part at the beginning though, with the date going poorly.
I found him on the beach seven years agoIt does sound suspicious.~I feel this was too abrupt, too. I think they could have been two separate Ficlets.
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