At first, i thought the poem referred to a heater…cold producing a warm blast…This line gets your attention, is very strong, producing a tactile (heat) memory, but maybe it needs to come later, with a simpler, more visually descriptive line first. I don’t know. I liked it, I could really “see” the instrument, but not quite “feel” or “hear” it. Keep going!
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