This reminds me of the kid in my creative writing class a few years ago who had some sort of fox fetish and wrote every single story about his fox Arnold (or something), even when the assignment specifically called for, I dont know, science fiction. Foxes in Spaaaaaaace…
Nothing personal. Okay. Anyway. Wouldn’t this person technically be considered a “merman”? Isn’t mermaid the female version? Or has Zoolander led me astray? Either way, this piece seems like it can become interesting over time.

I love where you’re going with this series. Keep writing! :)

very tender

I like that Jonathan (or Caspian) is just as protective of Winnie as she was of him. I think the beginning’s awkward, though.