Want to know what’s next! Continue please… Great ficlet!

wow, i’m speechless, this was really good!!!!!!!!!!

I liked it so much I wrote a prequel.

Hope you find it an acceptable take on your vision.

Cheers.

I absolutely loved this. It works brilliantly as a stand alone short, and it lays the foundation for something much larger, too.

That was terrific! I agree with Wil that it works great as a stand-alone. But, as SupRspi’s prequel shows, it has so much potential! I hope we get to see more from this little future history you’ve created.
LoA