Some apostrophe issues with the possessives, but you certainly paint a tense picture.
Oh wow! That’s an intense story! Gotta love the mom…with a knife under her chin, she’s got the cojones to yell “F* you”. That’s great.
yea, sorry abou the unclear…writing. my computer shut down on me 3 times and each time i had to add less detail
m8ryx
Fuchsia Deviant
Dr. Lew