Awesome terse/ tense /philisophical dialouge, I like the how coin was central throughout even up to the end. Great job. One Of my favorite of your ficlets!!!!! You really did a fantastic job with this challenge. ~ The style was film noirish. My compliments to you on this ficlet.
Absolutely superb! What’s so excellent is what isn’t said. Everyone knows what the bar looks like, the smell, what both were wearing, etc. I can see it in my mind as if I were there witnessing it.
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