Ooh! Excellent characters, and a world of Ficlet possibilities. (Can we create a word for Ficlet possibilities? We’re creative people. Someone get on that!)

Ficibilities? Fossibilities? Hmmm.. food for thought!

Ficpossiblets. Ana, this was incredible.. like the opening paragraph of a best selling novel. I agree with Alexa about the characters, very intriguing.

Wow, thanks. My family’s always bugging me to write the next bestselling novel so they can quit their jobs already, so maybe this is my ticket…

But Jesse Crawford was not a man to be ignored. Great description and I love the description in the ending: Now the angles of her face were more pronounced and her hair was shorter, but she was more beautiful, in some ways. For one of the first times in his life, Jesse found himself speechless. It seems you were just as brilliant 9 months ago as you are today. Well done .