I like how at the beginning I kind of get a glimpse into the kids family life and I kind off shake my head and think ‘now I wonder where the kid learned to bully!’
exactly.
Separate paragraphs would’ve been great.~ Don’t often see things from this point of view. It was very interesting.
fixed! I waved my magic ahem pen, and I have paragraphs! :) Thanks for the comment.
Good job with a challenging perspective. The character definitely needs some kind of therapy.
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