Because of You, by Kelly Clarkson

Great use of the song lyric! Excellent writing. You really sympathize with Erika’s character.

i love it!

♥

as an afterthought, however, isn’t the first line of because of you ‘i will not make the same mistakes that you did’?

yeah, but she didn’t say it had to be the first line of the song, did she? hmm…

Nope I said it could be any lyric, so you’re OK. The I used in mine, for example, is not the first lyric of the song.

i haven’t heard tht song in forever!!!!
nice job, i loveee it!