Not sure what to do, really. I needed to change the scene elsewhere, since the “viewpoint character” on the bridge had just been taken out for the time being by a stray bullet.
If I were rewriting this, I would expand the story, show how Jiana ended up in the hallway near the Heartstar. Maybe when more prequel/sequel linking options are available, I’ll write another segment or two and stick them in.
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