great beggining…
Other than some minor spelling mistakes, this is pretty good. Though if you can spare the character space, I recommend breaking this up into smaller sections. It will help make your narrative flow more smoothly. Looking forward to the sequel.
agree with ana – u mite wanna break it upbut u def need to sequel! [note me when/if u do]
mom threw away my paper, and I don’t have firefox…. care to tell me the spelling mistakes?
Great job on the re-write. ;)
lol thanks.
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Mask By The Moon