Familiar feel to it, like childhood. Simple subject written well.

good story but, kind of dull (to me)
don’t get me wrong Really well written but just not enough…charisma

lol…that sounds like my mom…she gets on my nerves always trying to talk to everybody she see :)

a stranger’s just a friend you haven’t met yet << best line! nvr heard tht befor =]
nice jobb. =]