The hellish roars gradually became a cacophonous combination of shrieks and screams. Fear, suffering, pain, death. Amidst the chaos, the twelfth infantry was being ripped to shreds. << best paragraph!
verry nice sequel =]

Awesome.

Lovely continuation…very gritty.

This is a fantastic sequel. Great idea for the psykers. Loved it.

can feel the tension. great sequel

Ooh yeah. Very much keeping the style and the world together. Very nice.