Ok they werer probably the worst haiku s’ EVER . And I wrote them.

they were so bad I deleted 2 of them.

lol this is funny and creative, very short though. still, nice work :]

lol haiku’s don’t really let you explain too much, so they’re not going to be the absolute best =]

I like the first stanza best. It’s simple and basic, like the best haiku.
Oh, and don’t forget to put the apostrophe in the last line for “man’s.” (Sorry, I’m an English teacher! :p)