A Few ?s Why does her sister go to another school? Does she babysit all the neighbor kids or something? Plus, it should be “see why I have to do my homework now” instead of “half” to. I’m sure this is just a typo, but just thought I’d let you know. And about all of the “really”s at the end…are they all neccessary….I guess you want to keep this 14 yr. old’s style authentic, but it kind of clogs up the piece? Keep on working! :) ♥
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