named instead of “name”
have instead of “half”

don’t completely understand the way you say you “revere naptime” I don’t know if that’s the right word choice.

hope you don’t get discouraged by my comments, I don’t mean to be rude, I just want to help ameliorate your writing. ♥

i really appreciate the constructive critisism, im only 13 so thats super useful. Btw, what does ameliorate mean? I love words and if i see one i dont know, i just half to know what it means! Oops, there i go again with half, its a habit of mine, ill fix it. also fixing name, which was a stupid mistake. Thanks!

Ameliorate means to improve or make better.

By the way, what exactly does “revere” mean?

thanks! Revere means to worship, or think very highly of. usually used in reference to God, like I revere you, god, but in this case it’s naptime. :)