I like it quite a bit. Struggling Writer – you do have a knack for this.. (and I have a penchant for Douglas Adams… I know.. big surprise there huh??) :)
Susan – thank you. This story is actually my favorite one I have written on this site. I hope to continue it at some point. Obviously, it was influenced by Douglas Adams, but hopefully it is still different enough.
Saffron
Norm McCray
Susan Holder is terrific
StrugglingWriter