Wow. Perfect prequel.

Awesome! I love the theme of trying to be a man for the family. Especially funny since Wil meant for the character to be a girl.

WOW ! This is damn perfect. You captured the tone, the setting, and everything just perfectly, and I love what you added to the story.

I am humbled by this. Excellent work.

omg! this is beautiful! wonderful prequel!!

that’s amazing. very well written!

Congrats on being the featured ficlet. awesome prequel to a great ficlet, the dad trying not to cry in front of his daughter, it’s heart warming. Well written.

This is good. And they are right, it is an excellent beginning.

Excellent. You totally do Wil’s original piece justice.

This was excellent. It flows perfectly into Wil’s piece. Well done!

I really enjoyed this piece, it fit well, and had a great beginning.

hAHahaHahaHA!