Her own stylist? Interesting. She may struggle a little to fit into that small town. Oh, and you might want to correct, you start with one past tense verb at the beginning, and then the rest is quite nicely present tense.
Wow, this is neat! I like the way the name fit…and fearing the transition from homeschool to public school—totally realistic. But as THX said, yeah, with the personal stylist and all, may have a little trouble fitting in…
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