you dont love her, fyi. i know this is fiction, but youre basing it on somebody real, and you dont love her. wait til you grow up before you decide youre having grown up feelings.

I seem to be missing what this has to do with the story it is a prequel to, other than to garner clickthroughs from a featured story.

There seems to be no plot, and no point – am I missing something?

What does this have to do with the story in question??? And there’s nothing mature here either.

This should be deleted

one question…..how is this rated mature?

one word……………..
CONFUSED !!!!!!!!!!

ummmmm. . . . . .
???
what the heck is this all about?

GUILT . my friend’s been iming this guy, being someone she aint.

tht was soo utterly and completely random and unrelated to the sequel.
and y is it in caps?
who are these ppl?!
the questions continue..

what is this? i mean… obviously it’s about something real… and AIM hasn’t even been around for THAT long… this is strange.

u all realize that u have given this person exactly what they want: attention! this is a waste of time but somehow it’s gotten more attention than REAL ficlets!

how’s this the continuation???? … dont tell me u think “love” is mature .. lol

is this a continuation of the sci fi-ish story and how is this mature again?

Packers suck.

GO LIONS

This isn’t really a story.

wait so you based this story on a person that your’e in to

that was whackulars

Nice Job getting most popular through your own stupidity, and what fourseven said, you don’t really love her anyway.

This is a retarded story but it is a big problem if it is happening in real life.