I hear writhing wet noises as I read this. :)

Ew, bulbous writhing mass even? Nice, though pretty gross, continuation. Fun, fun, fun how the story is going and going and going.

ah meez likez tha perspective change

I am inspired by the atmosphere you have created.

love the twist!

I will be more wary of the fog…. :)

How come there are so many “Z”’s?

Read it aloud and see what it does to the character. I am trying to give that evil lisping spitle type dialog