ohmygaush!! I LoVe the twist! totally wasn’t expecting tht..
..there’s one line tht sorta confoozled me tho – “I wonder what’s going on buy continue at a relaxed pace.” idk if it’s just me, but i didn’t get it.
the rest tho – i loved it! ohmygaud wait…
…i hafta sequel! gah!

Oops haha that wasn’t you… typo. I’ll go fix that now =]