this is excellent,
u might wanna correct that sentence though
“the dusty clouded my face”

oh thanks I was in a hurry

Congrats on being featured, Tigger! And amazing story too!

Third ficlet from the series to be featured. Really goes to show how awesome things can get with creative collaboration! Wil must be so proud.

Awesome.

wow
so good
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pretty good! i like this story almost as much as Wil’s(which is a lot)! the one thing i have to point out is that Wil’s was written in 2nd person (you…) but yours is written in 1st person.

I like the story it really good, but if the person had a swored or blade, why did she have to use the flashlight??

Flashlight was already in his hand

I liked this. changed the POV , but great nonetheless. :) LoA. – Yoda