first off, remember to click on mature but to help your writing, (correct me if im wrong because im only 12) i would say that It’s ok to just say “said” after or before speech its ok to spice it up a bit using words like demanded, but dont make it a hobby

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by far one of your best. :D
you really show that they’ve changed. toms not as patient. and cyn’s almost looking for trouble. :]]]]
iloveee you.
^^user 5927. mature pieces dont get read. and when i was twleve… i heard the word f* like everyday in my school haha… sorrayy

holyy shitt. i said iloveyou. lmao.
i meant ilove the text. hahahahha. sorry had a certain someone on muh mind. 0:]

baha, stupid tom =]
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LMAO ! very smooth hopeless =]
and to user 5927, i’m twelve too, and [i agree wit hopeless] i hear words like dat used daily.

Wow, you guys are all 12…I’m not, I just thought I should say that you’re right about mature stories not getting read…That’s my problem, most of the time.
I love this series, guys. It reminds me so much of my current relationship.

shes bein difficult