Comments on Snapshot: Bridget by Insert Pen Name Here

More Than Meets The Eyes

this is great!
i really like the detail.
thnx for writing a sequel.
i thought nobody was gonna.
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:55:54.
One Time, One Chance

hahha, nice job using everything =] i like this =]
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:55:54.
One Time, One Chance

hahha, nice job using everything =] i like this =]
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:55:54.
SupRspi

Nifty. I especially like where the waitress counts the people coming in. I’ve worked front and back of restaurants, and I can really sympathize with her.

Some simple sentence structure problems, but the story works like a snapshot, sort of a candid 2 minute movie of some random person’s life.

I like the idea lots.
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:55:54.