wow creepy, in time for halloween, zombies. very dark, well written piece.

Nice continuation. Finally someone gave the monsters a name. Well formed mental image.

good job with speeding the story up…

that was stupid and boring, must think they are real deep

I was right there in the story—the words dissapeared after a while and I could SEE what was happening, due to extraordinary writing!

actully it scared me 4 a minute awsome job though i’d give it like 7 stars way more then 5 atleast unlike KERMIT !!!!!stupid KERMIT but make another cause your definatly awsome

this is wonderful and written great…luv da way u described ev’rythin

Wow! I agree with Blondie Babe kind of scary at first. Very good writing though