I wish I could write sci- fi that well. Great job.
I tried to edit it, and apparently that didn’t work. Thanks though, Jonas didn’t seem to happy with it, which i thought was a bit cruel because he spoke of my mistakes so well, but hey, thanks.
Amazingly well written. And by the way, I love Cornelia Funke’s work too! Right now I’m reading Inkheart in German…or at least trying to.
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The 13 Year-Old
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