I love this. I work with teenagers everyday and it makes me think of them. Maybe not the idea you wanted to convey, but that’s how it struck me…. Especially the, “I get out my Spanish dictionary…” part!

Yes, the story was supposed to depict a teenage girl. Thanks!

mhmm… this is awesome darling. so deep.

haha – spanish dictonary…. =] nice jobb.

arg im trying to give u 5* but my computer is being stupid!!! oh well, good job!!