Probably not my best story, but I would love to hear people’s feedback on what they think about it. Let me know!

Aww…that’s so sad. It left me with a few questions, like why he’s pushing her away and saying he still loves her, but all the same, very nice piece.

I love it…. I think. I’d use something else, but I can’t find the word so I’ll use the forbidden one:

interesting.

wow,sweet,melancholy, you are a talent i shall add u on my list to read all you write.