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Big Time Jerk {Lone Writers Challenge}

They were in line, it was about fifty minutes until the concert started.
Dawn could hardly contain her excitement; jumping,
screaming “Fall Out Boy” along with the rest of the crowd.
Jerry held Ash in his arms kissing the back her neck,
when Dawn took one jump to many landing on Jerry’s foot.
“Hey watch it girl”.
Girl! Dawn sounded insulted.
“The name is Dawn, and I’m sorry” she said sarcasticly.
Amy gave Dawn a nudge, calm down she whispered.
“Yeah”, Jerry said kinda giggling while Ash kissed him.
About that time Marianne flounced by in one of her horrid hot pink outfits;
snubbing Ash and Jerry.
“Where does she think she’s going Jerry” belted out?
“Who cares” Ash said getting his face.
Rude, Dawn blurted out in Jerrys direction.
Who you calling rude; he pushed Ash aside?
Dawn smiled, duh you.
Jerry rolled his eye’s; “small town girl’s”.
Dawn crossed her arms and leaned to the side “big time jerk”.

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