awesome, J R R Tolkien would be proud, your son has talent for the fantasy genre. action packed, I hope that he writes more and sequels this.

What a great storyline. This comes from an 11 year old? He must take after his mother. Hope to read more from you – judee4u2

Your son’s story is excellent. I had to write a sequel immediately. I hope it’s up to his standards.

I second judee4u2, It’s quite the gene pool he belongs to.

I’ll have to thank you all for him. He has been sitting at my shoulder since I started writing here on ficlets and has been bugging me to death to join. For now, though, I’ll just post for him.

He has been asking me to write a warrior story, and I started one. He was annoyed and told me to move so he could write a real one. :) So here it is.

Hey thanks everyone for commenting my story. -From Jenson

Great job! Reminds me of me when I was that age. :)