“Jolly Fat Man Day” is hilarious and very creative. :)

hahahhahaha this is hilarious=]

I think you need a ” at the end of the second line. But otherwise, great story.

I would have liked a little more whitespace to make the story easier to read, but that’s just me bing nitpicky.

The idea is good, fairly well realized. While I don’t agree with one of your characters arguments the fact that I realize that means the conversation seemed ‘real’ to me.

Makes me think of something friends and I would chat about after a few drinks.