great work building the tension…I love the blackness part

eww that’s horrible! god i feel bad

Oh my word, what a great sequel. The one thing worse than fainting is waking up and not knowing where you are or what has happened. Very visceral and scary.
LoA

this style of writing reminds of the poet elizabeth bishop ihave no reason for that opinion other than it feels the like same texture or something i cant put my finger on it 5*s