Interesting. There are a few mistakes in the conjugation of certain verbs (it should be “conto” instead of “contaba” in the first line; where you write “encontrana,” I think you mean to say “encontraba”; limitaciones is misspelled [move the s over]; and in the last paragraph, you should write “nosotros” instead of “nos”). It reminds me of Paolo Coehlo.
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