emptying my mind of the toxic smallness that
clutters my life. > awesome line as was the whole ficlet, your character feels bigger powerful and alive when the mice scurry, like they are insignificent compared to him.

this kind of gave me that creepy “is someone there” feeling. nice job I’m wondering what happens when mice attack!!

wow thats really good. its really descripive, i can picture it clearly
makes me wat to kno more…