I wrote this to help people undestand that time is just that ,time. what we do in our time makes life meaningful.

Hmm, you used different tenses in a couple places (present vs. future), and it got really sloppy and confusing at the end. You have a neat message, but it gets lost in the jumble at the end. Oh, and you might appreciate the book ‘Momo’ by Michael Ende who also wrote ‘The Neverending Story’, if I’m not mistaken. It has a lovely message about time and how we use it.

LoA

thanks for the imput I’ll think it through more carefully next time.