Oh! Is he gonna kill her? Nooo! Please, write more! This is amazing!

I’m with someday_93—I want to know more. Why does he want to kill her? Very good idea in having the stalker play the consoling friend as well. This story is too big for a ficlet, you should keep writing! Thankyou for the read.

I like that your character’s actions have reactions, it adds to the realness. You’ve streamlined logic and purpose—an example is when she gets some excuse not to link video feed and she thinks, “well, I can wait til tomorrow” where as the stalker knows the window is closing before he’ll seem suspicious, so he grabs his murder gear and decides to start the show., Nice.

OMG is he gonna kill her???