So nice, I loved it. A simply beautiful attempt. I love poetry and I was just pratically reduced to tears. Well done.

I really liked this as well. Simple, like Lindsay said…great poetry! Keep writing!

im new to al of this and i think that was realy good, deep and has a meaning that is understood.

wats up rin, your poem = awesome sooooooooooo deep
by the way dis is missy & lexy

what happened to the _{i love you} at the end, like the one in ur room. you should add it.

ya i know i already posted a comment but u know that i love this ficlet cuz its freakin awesome

luv it. i think you should add the one in your room too.

this is the one i wrote and hung in my room smart one!!!lol