Misstress, alright! What a fantastic snippet. That picture is a great find and your story makes the photo rich with meaning. I laughed when I read your characters name, lil benji because it was so perfect. My one critique is… would boys be concerned with slimy creepy crawlies? lol but that does add to their personalities so I can’t deduct a star for it. Great job.
Tad Winslow