very mysterious, and very descriptive! nice jobb=]

really intresting makes me want more I liked it!!

Full of vivid descriptions, your strong suit .

i agree with OTOC very mysterious…
i loved it!!

Such a picturesque scene with such a macabre ending. What do make of that last line? Well, couldn’t resist, so I decided to make something of it. Sequel!
LoA

Wow Tad. I love me a ghostie story and this one was unexpectedly cool (By unexpected I mean I wouldn’t have come up with the ghost angle from looking at that bright, colourful pic. Not that I don’t think you can write a cool story. I know you can :) ) I love what you did with this. Saving it to my clippings thingie.