The ending is what makes the whole piece come together and make sense. When the reader finds out it’s the brother who is pretending to be a shark and not an actual shark the cheese factor vanishes and the punch lines become very fitting for the story. It was worth reading more than once. And explosively laughing is always a good time.

my brothers prented to be sharks in our pool and tried to pull me under, made me fear water till last yr, enjoyed your ficlet.