This started out extremely well, but then the last two paragraphs confused me. I wasn’t prepared for a letter to be produced at all, so I had to re-read a few times. Obviously you intend to continue…..I urge you to do so!

Great similes and metaphors!

I’m with Mistress Elsha. This is screaming for a sequel. And the line, Blinking, sizzling, like it couldn’t quite rid itself of a pesky eyelash. is one of the best lines I’ve read on this here site.