…and now it’s your turn. Have a holiday with this one.

Neat, neat start…a bit of a typical adolescent fear (what? am I the only one worried about large water fowl?) and something magical. Will have to think about a sequel…and work on it when my boss isn’t two feet away. Shhhhh.

LoA

I’ve been chased by geese before too…
I like the time freezing when he waves a stick detail…That could make a lot of possibilities…

mhmmm…. i really like this one. part cutesy little story; part psychological mystery, why has time frozen and what’s up with the geese and his fear? very good!